April 1, 2025

Building an Investable Narrative: Lessons from Writing $180M+ Worth of Pitch Decks

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After co-writing the deck that closed the largest seed round in Texas history and going on to help founders secure over $180 million in funding through my firm, Market Chemistry, I’ve learned a thing or two about what makes an effective pitch deck.

The truth is, most founders are overthinking it – following templates they’ve found online without understanding the true purpose of this crucial document.

What a Pitch Deck Really Is: The “Hook Deck” Concept

Let’s start by reframing how you think about your pitch deck.

It’s not a comprehensive business plan or an exhaustive explanation of your technology.

It’s what I call a “hook deck” – a concise, story-driven slideshow that shares the high-level overview of your business with one specific goal: to compel consideration from investors.

Think of your pitch deck as the key asset in a marketing campaign, where the product is your business and the audience is investors.

This subtle shift in perspective changes everything about how you approach its creation.

A hook deck has only two things to prove to an investor:

  1. Why your business is investable
  2. Why you have the right team to succeed

That’s it. Everything else is just noise.

The Goal: Getting the First Meeting

Many founders misunderstand the goal of a pitch deck.

They believe it needs to answer every possible question an investor might have. This is incorrect and counterproductive.

The actual goal of your pitch deck is much simpler: to secure a meeting with the investor. It’s the first step in a larger process:

Hook Deck + Investor Solicitation = Investor Connection

That investor connection leads to a meeting where they’ll investigate the details beyond your initial claims. Getting to that meeting is all your deck needs to accomplish.

Rules for an Impactful Narrative

Through my experience crafting decks for startups across industries, I’ve developed clear guidelines for creating a compelling narrative:

1. One Headline Per Slide – Make It Count

Each slide should contain a single, assertion-based headline in sentence case. This headline should make a clear statement, not just label a topic.

Instead of: “Market Size” 

Write: “Our addressable market is growing 32% annually with decreasing competition”

Great examples I’ve used:

  • A diversified portfolio doesn’t need to be stressful, actively managed, or heavily maintained.
  • Outdated contamination testing jeopardizes patients and profits.
  • Our science will power new product lines for enterprise pharma markets.

These headlines tell a story as investors flip through your deck, even if they ignore everything else.

2. Write at a 5th Grade Level

Simplicity is clarity, not dumbing down.

Even highly technical investors appreciate clear, accessible language. I recommend running your content through the Hemingway App to check readability.

Complexity doesn’t signal sophistication – it signals confused thinking.

When you truly understand your business, you can explain it simply.

3. Keep Text Light

Avoid dense paragraphs and bullet point overload. Your deck is a visual aid for a conversation, not a document meant to be read in isolation.

For each slide, ask yourself: “What is the one thing I want investors to remember from this?” Then prioritize that element visually.

4. Explain Complex Concepts Visually

When faced with complex subjects or multiple points, use visuals instead of text.

A well-designed diagram or chart can communicate complex relationships faster and more effectively than several paragraphs.

The Reality vs. Expectations Gap

There’s a significant gap between what founders think investors expect in a pitch deck and what actually works.

Most people have seen famous examples like:

  • The Guy Kawasaki Deck (10 slides)
  • The Sequoia Deck (8 slides)
  • The Airbnb Deck (14 slides)

These well-known templates have created certain expectations, but the reality is that you need to adapt these formats to your specific situation.

While keeping your deck concise (8-15 slides) and hitting the expected topics (problem, solution, business model, market, etc.), don’t be afraid to customize where necessary.

Go outside the norm, where there are important points to be made that don’t fit neatly into traditional categories.

The key is ensuring every deviation serves a clear purpose in telling your story.

Essential Slides That Make or Break Your Deck

In my experience, these are the slides that have the greatest impact:

Problem/Target Market

No matter who you’re presenting to, it’s crucial that your business addresses a real problem.

Name this problem succinctly and include brief contributing factors if needed.

Don’t over-explain, add unnecessary jargon, cite numerous sources, or make your problem so vague that it doesn’t set up your particular solution.

For target market slides, clearly identify who is affected by this problem and who your primary customer is.

Include backing data, but don’t start sizing the market here – save that for a dedicated market slide.

Solution

Explain how your product or service solves the customer problem and how your startup offers something better than the current standard.

Avoid getting too technical or making claims without proof. Focus on the value proposition rather than feature lists.

Business Model

Clearly outline your revenue model and go-to-market plan. Investors need to understand how you’ll actually make money.

Don’t present unrealistic financial assumptions or oversimplify complexities. If your business model is nuanced, acknowledge that and explain the key drivers.

Market

Quantify your market sizing (TAM, SAM, and SOM) with credible and recent research. This is where you demonstrate the scale of the opportunity.

Avoid using top-down, sweeping generalizations without bottom-up analysis to support them. Investors will see through inflated market size claims.

Team

Highlight the team’s relevant expertise and credentials that specifically relate to this venture. This isn’t just about impressive past employers – it’s about demonstrating why this team is uniquely positioned to solve this problem.

Don’t undersell experience, rely completely on logos from other companies, or appear unbalanced across key functions needed for your business.

You Are Marketing Your Business, Not Your Product

This is perhaps the most important mindset shift: In fundraising, you are marketing your business to investors – not your product, service, or access.

Your pitch deck should position your company as an attractive investment opportunity, not just showcase your product.

This means highlighting metrics that matter to investors: market opportunity, competitive advantage, traction, unit economics, and growth potential.

Final Thoughts: Your Deck Is Your First Impression

After working on countless pitch decks that have collectively raised over $180 million, I’ve seen firsthand how a well-crafted narrative can open doors that would otherwise remain closed.

Remember that your deck is often your first impression with potential investors.

It should be clear, compelling, and focused on getting you to that all-important first meeting. Everything else happens in conversation.

The best pitch decks make complex ideas simple, tell a coherent story, and leave investors wanting to learn more.

If you can accomplish that, you’re already ahead of most founders in the fundraising game.